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Dawn Hurwitz's avatar

Loved hearing this sensuous story in your voice with all its inflections into it.

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Kole Flatau's avatar

oh great ! Thanks so much for listening, Dawn. I have to say, I rather like doing the voice overs….

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Ooh, this is potent!!

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Kole Flatau's avatar

oooh, thank you for reading /listening, Josefin. I like a bit of potent

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Matthew Sutcliffe's avatar

the beat is still beating, the lights still lighting up my concealed cool smile and I'm still gyrating some hours after reading this.

Right here, right now, these sounds falling through my mind...

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Kole Flatau's avatar

ha! excellent! you can't beat it, right?..... thanks for reading/listening, Matthew (you old Club hound!)

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Sally Jupe's avatar

Thanks Kole, I somehow thought your Substack would be an experience and a half! Excellent and different.

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Kole Flatau's avatar

hahaha… thanks so much for reading, Sally

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Fiona writes's avatar

She’s a dancer with long nylon legs and red shoes with lofty talons.

Such a perfectly detailed, simply drawn image!

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Kole Flatau's avatar

that’s great to hear. Thanks so much for reading, Fiona

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Kateri Ewing's avatar

Wow. Wow wow! Loved it. Loved your reading and the sound effects. More please!

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Kole Flatau's avatar

good to hear ! Thanks so much for listening, Kateri

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Georg Cook's avatar

Such an atmospheric piece 🩵

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Kole Flatau's avatar

Thanks for reading or listening, Georg 😊

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CAROL GRANT's avatar

Absolutely adored this Kole. Such evocative writing. I was in that club with you (I would have been too scared to go in on my own...). Loved the line 'His tongue washed me like I was both the dish to eat and the plate to lick'. Fantastic

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Kole Flatau's avatar

I’m delighted you made it into the club, Carol, I’ll accompany you whenever you feel like going ! And thanks so much for reading.

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